I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Wednesday, 6 March 2013

Dead Silent

The autumn rain fell gently onto the amber leaves.Four hikers carefully tread through the crumpled leaves of the forest, careful not to make any loud noises, their senses tight as they clutch shotguns.To you, you may think that they were hunting with very odd weapons, but you are very wrong, as they are being hunted.How did this occur you are thinking.

Well...yesterday these four innocent people were on their way to a hike.Bob,Ryan,Jill and Kate also known as Kat they were the four people i was telling you about earlier.Bob was a big, bulky coal worker and done some time behind bars before.He had broad shoulders and blue eyes that glinted when caught in the sun.he also had dark brown hair that was cut in an army style.Jill was Bobs wife, she had musky grey eyes and a shoulder length dirty blond mixed with grey hair.Ryan and Kat were their teenage kids.Ryan was 16 and handsome, he had jet black hair and dark green eyes and his face was gentle and he had a sweet smile.Kat was 15 and had a devilish look upon her as she had black hair with  purple and red  high lights.She all ways wore black really short shorts and a tank top.her lips were all ways a pinkish red and they shimmered all the time.

As they were walking up the steps to the forest wardens place to tell him where they were going and how long for,they found a disturbing dead body of  what looked like a bear, but it was so ripped up that it was hard to tell.Its guts were all over the place.A bloody hand print was printed on the tree next to the carcass.
"Dear God!" Jill screamed as she put her hand over her mouth.


Hi guys that was my writing sample that was used in one of my writing tests.
Hope you like it.

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