I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Tuesday, 9 April 2013


Once upon  Rose found a vase that she always wanted to fill
Everyday she thump thump thumped across the road to the park
One day a man took her and stab stab stabed her flop she went limp
because of that a bright spiret light lited her up and wosh her body disintagated and she turned into a ghost
because of that she howls 'hhhhhhhoooooooooooowwwwwlllll' at who ever dares walk in the park
because of that there is until not a sound in the park any more
Until finally no one stomped in the park anymore
ever since she has romed around the park wating her revenge
the moral of the story is dont go alone in a park

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