I am a student at Tawa Intermediate School in Wellington, New Zealand. I am in Room 15 and a member of the amazing Huia Syndicate. My teacher is Stephanie Thompson.

Thursday, 20 June 2013

my writing test

2 Years Ago:

‘Whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooh’ whistles the cold autumn wind,
me and Jack are  playing in the rainbow of leaves on the moist ground.Our ball
flings into the woods ‘CRACK,SMASH’ goes a branch inside the dark
gloomy woods.Birds fly everywhere from the tree tops.’HHHHHHOOOOOWWWLLL’
a huge monstrous sound came from the trees and then more of them ’HHHHHOOOOOWWWWWLLL’ goes another.
“don’t worry I will get it” says Jack. “be careful!” I yell as he walks cautiously into the creeky woods.’HHHHOOOOOWWWWWWLLLLLL’ goes one more of these creatures that no one has seen before. suddenly I hear jack scream like nothing I’ve heard before.i turn my head towards
jacks direction and a huge figure cloaked in a red road grabes jack and pulls him into the misty

trees more of them came to the border of  the forest then disappeared.that was the last time i saw jack for  four years.

This is my story of how i find jack and the epic journey that goes inbetween.

Now

After Jack disappeared two years ago, more people disappeared after too.
Wood cutters, gatherers, children, even priests, they were all just kids starting jobs or playing.These monsters take anything with flesh that strays into the dark forest.
everyday we take a goat or a cow and chain it to a pole near the woods,
and every night .they take the animal and either leave us with nothing but bones
or they a mysterious object  by the chain.sometimes its a coin or maybe its an arrow. only children and animals go missing.between the ages of 4 to 14 for children is the scariest of times
because there are children that don’t even go into the woods and still go missing

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